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Artist's Comments"Seeing is believing but I don't wanna know; Walk on through the wasteland I just can't let go; Face down I just break down when I see you cry all the time." When I saw stock model I knew that I must use it. Hope you'll like it! +Model ~Kuoma-stock +Background ~pelleron-stock +Leaves ~JLStock + everything else is painted by me. (hair, make-up, shadows, light, skin & clothes retouching...) © 2009 =queenofladiestoilets aka Sandrine H. Lynx This artwork may not be reproduced, copied, edited, published, transmitted or uploaded in any way without my express written permission. All rights reserved! Commentsthis is so beautiful my friend! the hair is amazing!
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Critiques
I love how the hair is so very long... LONG hair is MY thing, too... and it's very difficult to pull it off and you certainly have.
However, I think the bangs are a tad out of place... the direction they are turned does not match the flow of the rest of the hair and I know you are showing movement in that it looks as though she is turning/spinning, but the bangs are just out of place. First, they are straighter than the rest of the hair, which would be okay if they were angled just slightly lower. Second, the colour of them make them look more blurry and painted rather than natural like the rest.
And, one last constructive criticism: Her eye makeup is too hard to see from such a small resolution... makes her eye look odd and chingy... and I KNOW you put detail on that eye... My suggestion is simply to allow the full view to be larger so we can see the detail I'm sure you worked tediously on.
The rest of the piece is perfection... as usual. Her skin is impeccable and everything flows beautifully. I really like the fog in the background and the leaf brushes don't even look like brushes... that's awesome.
I hope you take my critique as constructive and not just plain ol' criticism. I always enjoy seeing what you create, Darling.
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