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      "Seeing is believing but I don't wanna know;
      Walk on through the wasteland I just can't let go;
      Face down I just break down when I see you cry all the time."
    Anathema » Release

    :bulletred: This is my entry for =seduced-by-the-sun's "My own Fairytale" contest. :bulletred:

    When I saw stock model I knew that I must use it. Hope you'll like it!

    :bulletred: CREDITS:

    +Model ~Kuoma-stock
    +Background ~pelleron-stock
    +Leaves ~JLStock

    + everything else is painted by me.
    (hair, make-up, shadows, light, skin & clothes retouching...)

    © 2009 =queenofladiestoilets aka Sandrine H. Lynx

    :pointr: IMPORTANT © COPYRIGHT NOTICE
    This artwork may not be reproduced, copied, edited, published,
    transmitted or uploaded in any way without my express written
    permission. All rights reserved!


    :frail:

Critiques


:icondarkdeviousqueen:
Your work is amazing as always, my Darling... I love to see what you submit. Your art is incredible.

I love how the hair is so very long... LONG hair is MY thing, too... and it's very difficult to pull it off and you certainly have.

However, I think the bangs are a tad out of place... the direction they are turned does not match the flow of the rest of the hair and I know you are showing movement in that it looks as though she is turning/spinning, but the bangs are just out of place. First, they are straighter than the rest of the hair, which would be okay if they were angled just slightly lower. Second, the colour of them make them look more blurry and painted rather than natural like the rest.

And, one last constructive criticism: Her eye makeup is too hard to see from such a small resolution... makes her eye look odd and chingy... and I KNOW you put detail on that eye... My suggestion is simply to allow the full view to be larger so we can see the detail I'm sure you worked tediously on.

The rest of the piece is perfection... as usual. Her skin is impeccable and everything flows beautifully. I really like the fog in the background and the leaf brushes don't even look like brushes... that's awesome.

I hope you take my critique as constructive and not just plain ol' criticism. I always enjoy seeing what you create, Darling.
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:iconjinxedbyemily:
Wow, the detail in the material of the dress is great! Love the soft lighting. Looks wonderful.
:iconchaosmodifier:
Beautiful!

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When life gives you lemons, make chiffon!
England's word is as good as it's Bond,
James Bond.
:iconblacksoliloquy:
Just breathtaking. I love the setting and the feel of it and the model really is stunning. Great work :heart:
:iconmanips-of-artist2:
this is so beautiful my friend! the hair is amazing! :love:

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Beauty never exists except in dreams ...
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Member of =DesigningDivas
:icondesideriasp:
This is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! :wow:
I love it!!! :love:

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Beyond the dreams...
:iconkeyko020988:
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW ŚLICZNE!!!!!!!Uwielbiam twoje prace są takie cudne^^ :iconbigheartplz: te tła te postacie ech miodzio^^

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Sorry for my english! It may not be very good sometimes XD

I'm from Poland and I didn't learn English. I learnt German.
:iconricky4:
Amazing work, nice detailed hair! :nod:
:iconshadowbrooke:
Great emotion and atmosphere!

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